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Reader's Question: How do you work writing into your life?

Thursday, 17 May 2012 10:17
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Here's the full Q: How do you work writing into your life?  I often find myself without any time to write, or if I do have the time, I am not in the "zone". I am tired, or worn, and so I end up going for months on end without writing. That makes it hard to get better and hard to get anything done. How do you manage this?*

 A: The first thing to know is that you are not alone; the practical problem of sitting down to write is one that every writer has to face. We all find our tricks for simply doing the work.

My number one piece of advice is to set a very, very small daily goal. Instead of beating yourself up for not spending three hours writing, give yourself lots of kudos for making twenty minutes (or even ten!) happen. I wrote a lot of my first novel in ten-minute chunks of writing with my students.

If you want more ideas on motivation to do what you want to do, check out my post on how to eat an elephant or my nerdy but effective way of making sure I meet my own small daily goals.

 

*Question courtesy of the National Writing Project·and readers of Figment.com for the National Day on Writing. Read highlights of the event in·this post·or listen to me and four other guests talk about the National Day on Writing for the NWP blogtalk radio program here.

How to do it like Bach: Counterpoint in Writing

Thursday, 12 April 2012 10:31
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Something that I'm working on in novel #3 is keeping various lines in the plot going at the same time while also creating meaningful connections between these lines. In music, this is called counterpoint. (Disclaimer, y'all: I'm no musician. In fact, my elementary school music teacher took me aside before a school concert and gently suggested, "You just mouth the words, honey." The only reason I know such a thing as counterpoint exists is that I had many musically gifted friends some 12 years ago when I was a student at Simon's Rock.)

A quick skim of the Wikipedia article on counterpoint confirms that it is, precisely, what I'd like to accomplish with my current plotting efforts:

In its most general aspect, counterpoint involves the writing of musical lines that sound very different and move independently from each other but sound harmonious when played simultaneously... In the words of John Rahn:

It is hard to write a beautiful song. It is harder to write several individually beautiful songs that, when sung simultaneously, sound as a more beautiful polyphonic whole. The internal structures that create each of the voices separately must contribute to the emergent structure of the polyphony, which in turn must reinforce and comment on the structures of the individual voices. 

The separation of harmony and counterpoint is not absolute. It is impossible to write simultaneous lines without producing harmony, and impossible to write harmony without linear activity. The composer who chooses to ignore one aspect in favour of the other still must face the fact that the listener cannot simply turn off harmonic or linear hearing at will; thus the composer risks creating annoying distractions unintentionally. Bach's counterpoint—often considered the most profound synthesis of the two dimensions ever achieved—is extremely rich harmonically and always clearly directed tonally, while the individual lines remain fascinating.

So, from now on: my new mantra is, "Bach it." I'm betting I'm not alone in my aspirations. All right, y'all, go Bach it now.

How to beat writer's block over and over

Monday, 09 April 2012 10:57
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Last week, I shared one of my favorite tricks for beating writing block with figment.com, the amazing (as in, "Holy cow, where were you when I was sixteen?!") online writing community for teens and YA lovers. (Seriously, everybody... if you know a teen writer, make sure they know about this site.)

My method involves any book whose prose you admire, a pencil, and some careful attention to the joints between words. It's guaranteed (just about) to shake you out of writer's block if you've got it, and you can use it over and over...

Read the whole prompt here. You won't be sorry!

Reader's Question: How did you get noticed as a writer?

Thursday, 05 April 2012 10:23
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Q: How did you get yourself noticed and your work out there? Did you ever feel like your writing wasn't good enough?*

All writers feel like their writing is not good enough. If they didn't, they'd never slave over it to make it better. To make it great, even.

At the same time, obsessing too much can be paralyzing. Hemingway wrote that every writer needs "a built-in, shock-proof shit detector," which is true, but you need to make sure that shit detector has an off switch. (I wrote about this particularly important off switch here).

If I couldn't turn off my inner (psycho) editor, I'd never be able to write out the pages of crap that, sometimes inexplicably, lead to something special. Don't settle for mediocre writing in your final drafts; don't worry about it in your drafts.

As for getting noticed, my best advice is to find other writers whose opinion you respect and to share your work with them. I do this "live" with my writers group, but a website like Figment.com is a great way to connect to other aspiring writers.

·*Question courtesy of the·National Writing Project·and readers of·Figment.com for the National Day on Writing. Read highlights of the event in·this post·or listen to me and four other guests talk about the National Day on Writing for the NWP blogtalk radio program·here.

Suspense and Tension: You Need Lots of Layers for a 300-Page Striptease

Monday, 02 April 2012 10:33
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Like most writers I've worked with in workshops and writing groups, I tend to think too much about when I'm going to tell my readers something. Instead, we should be asking ourselves, how long can we go without telling our juicy bits?

Of course, you don't want to be coy with your reader or make her feel tricked, led-on, or otherwise done wrong. Nor do you want to build up a reveal so much that--no matter how big a deal it is--it leaves the reader thinking, "is that all?"

But! Neither do you want to toss away all your character's secrets and complications in the first chapters of your book. As Noah Lukeman writes in The Plot Thickens, "storytelling is not about giving away information but about withholding it."

Ilsa Bick's Drowning Instinct is a recent example of just the right level of restraint--she manages to keep us hanging on to find out the specific details of the tragedy that opens the book. That restraint ups the tension and anticipation in the book.

Of course, it helps that Bick weaves together many threads in the plot. In fact, that's a second point about this whole withholding idea: it works best when you're working between several plot lines or at least dimensions of a story. In Bick's, for example, in addition to the big secret, we have unanswered questions for at least fifty pages at a time for a number of plot threads. These additional layers of mystery, which are peeled back befor the "big reveal" keep our eyes trained on the novel's striptease. The result is suspense, lots of it.

I'd like to have some of that. So I'm working on my layers...

Making the shy speak: Quiet characters

Thursday, 26 January 2012 11:05
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I have a problem: one of the main characters of my new novel-in-progress is shy, quiet, tongue-tied. She's also passionate, secretly sensual, and fiercely dedicated to what she cares about. But how do I get her to speak? What does it mean for narration when a character is quiet? Do I write in the third person? Or would that be like saying that, because she's shy, Naomi can't speak for herself?

You'd think I'd know what to do with Naomi since I am, myself, rather shy. It's something that few people realize because I tend to project a bubbly personality--probably an overcompensation. Teaching, too, has helped me to be able to turn "on" even when I'd rather go hide behind a filing cabinet. But as this website all about shyness (and famous people who were shy) says, "Shyness is not who we are, but something we feel while we do the things we do."

Okay, so Naomi doesn't = shyness. But I believe she is--unlike me--the kind of shy person that other people recognize as shy. For the boy who'll fall in love with her, that shyness is part of her mystique.

But what does the inner voice of a shy person sound like? If, for example, Naomi has trouble finding the words she needs to speak, does she nevertheless feel very strongly--inside--what she wants to say? How can I capture this contrast?

For my own confessions about overcoming shyness in the classroom, check out this post.

Reader's Question: What to do when other passions get in the way of writing?

Thursday, 05 January 2012 10:21
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Q: I have a hard time balancing my love of photography and my love of writing. Is there something else you enjoy doing that sometimes gets in the way of your writing?*

A: Um, yes! I had almost exactly the same problem. I used to spend a lot of time with darkroom photography in the days before digital. And while photography and writing are by no means incompatible—indeed, I took a whole class in college exploring the relationship between the two—there is a certain school of thought that says you don’t want to use up your creative energy on anything else but your writing. The poet Mary Oliver writes about how she always chose to do boring, crap jobs so she wouldn’t be too intellectually stimulated (or satisfied) at work. Here’s the quote I’m thinking of: “ I was very careful never to take an interesting job. If you have an interesting job, you get interested in it.”

For me, something was lost in the switch to digital, and when I no longer had access to a darkroom, I more or less let photography go. You can read about my nostalgia for darkrooms here. But that doesn’t mean you have to! See if you can find a way to bring the two interests together. One way is to do writing that complements your photography, another is to use photographs as starting points for writing, still another is to bring in what you know about photography into the world of your stories by making it important to one of your characters.

 *Question courtesy of the National Writing Project·and readers of Figment.com for the National Day on Writing. Read highlights of the event in·this post·or listen to me and four other guests talk about the National Day on Writing for the NWP blogtalk radio program here.

Getting inside an Explosion

Monday, 19 December 2011 10:19
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There is an explosion in my new (third) novel. How do I write it?

It's strange the things we manage to draw on when we're writing. I reckon that the shock I felt when I had a small-scale kitchen explosion didn't measure up to what explosion victims and survivors experienced. But. It's a starting place.

For me, sometimes the best thing when it comes to bringing a scene to life is finding some kernel in my own life that I can write out of, no matter how much I may need to magnify, distort, or otherwise alter the experience.

It's mostly about finding a way to capture an emotional truth, something that feels truly lived and therefore resonates with the reader.

There are a couple of scenes in The Knife and the Butterfly, for example, that I wrote out of memories of being awake after everyone else in a house had gone to sleep. One finds Azael sitting in the bathroom of an abandoned apartment, contemplating a message scrawled inside a cabinet.

Probably it doesn't matter to anyone else how I imagined my way into this scene, but for me finding that link between my life and a character's life is everything. To get Azael to think thoughts he can only have when he feels cut off from the world, I summoned that sense of unbearable silence in my grandparents' house when everyone was asleep. I craved noise--any noise. Movement--any movement.

Maybe my kitchen explosion will be enough to help me tuck myself into my characters' experiences.

Five reasons NOT to self-publish your novel as an e-book

Thursday, 15 December 2011 10:41
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I know, I know, self-publishing e-books is all the rage. Who wouldn't like a bigger cut of their profits? Who wouldn't like to see their book "out there" as quickly as possible? Who wouldn't like to be the next success story? Here are the reasons why I would recommend that you think twice about self-publishing your first novel as an e-book.

(1) Amazon.com is NOT looking out for your art.

Of course, a traditional publisher also has profit on the mind. But they also have a reputation to protect, an investment in quality. Amazon? Not exactly known for customer service. Amazon has nothing riding on you, your book, or its success. They are more than happy to let you put your stuff out there, whatever the quality; they expect consumers to separate the wheat from the chaff. I'm amazed with Carolrhoda Lab, my publisher. I couldn't ask for a more amazing editor than Andrew Karre--or for better company for my books. Check out the reviews (look at those stars and awards!) for Carolhoda Lab titles, and then try to tell me that quality isn't the top concern.

(2) It's too easy.

Amazon.com promises that "publishing takes less than five minutes and your book usually appears on the Kindle store within a day." You might think that sounds great, but are you really ready to publish?

One of the biggest frustrations for beginning writers is discovering the many gatekeepers in the publishing industry. Literary agents, editors, publishers, publicists... how do you find your way? You need a perfect query letter and synopsis... and an iron-clad ego to handle the rejection letters. But all these steps also provide the aspiring author with many reasons to reconsider her work, to crack the manuscript open again and find the new opportunities for improvement. And that's before an editor goes to work on the manuscript. Take out those gatekeepers, take out the reflection that they force on the writer, and suddenly it becomes easy to publish material that's not ready for the world.

(3) You can't take it back.

Let's say that you do self-publish. You might find great success, but you might also find that you've dropped your baby into an impersonal, indifferent virtual world. Further, barring tremendous success of your book (and y'all, those mega-sales are rare!), you've just ensured that that novel will never come out with a traditional publisher. 

(4) It's too soon to know how things will shake down with e-publishing.

Sure, self-publishing might turn out to be the greatest way to reach readers, but do really know how the process is going to shake down? What looks like a great deal might turn out to be a big bust. So unless you have a crystal ball...

(5) Some markets are hard to crack with e-books or print-on-demand books.

Let's think about children's and YA publishing (my world!). Librarians are key figures in this world, and self-published titles (print or electronic) are unlikely to reach them. More and more people have the means to consume e-books, but are your ideal readers in that group? Some of the readers who matter most to me--kids on the fringe, teens without fat wallets, newcomers to the US--don't have wide access to e-readers.

So... I'm not saying NOT to self-publish. I'm saying think twice--no, five times--before you do.

Writing Inspiration: Feel THEIR words from YOUR pen

Monday, 12 December 2011 10:53
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Let's say you want to write but you're stuck. Blocked. Nothing's coming out. But you can't just sit there.

So try this:

(1) Get down a favorite book from your shelf. Find a passage you really admire. 

(2) Write it out longhand into your writer's notebook.

See what you see. If nothing else, you'll pay closer attention to words you believe to be great. Or if you are really looking to see how a story is put together, try writing the whole thing out. The task gives you time to think as you write, and rewriting it is an excellent reminder that that permanent-looking text was once an imperfect, sloppy draft.

WARNING: You are NOT to sit there and think about how much better the text is  than anything you will ever write. That is NOT part of the exercise. I will NOT be responsible for you if you choose to think that way...

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