Suspense and Tension: You Need Lots of Layers for a 300-Page Striptease
Like most writers I've worked with in workshops and writing groups, I tend to think too much about when I'm going to tell my readers something. Instead, we should be asking ourselves, how long can we go without telling our juicy bits?
Of course, you don't want to be coy with your reader or make her feel tricked, led-on, or otherwise done wrong. Nor do you want to build up a reveal so much that--no matter how big a deal it is--it leaves the reader thinking, "is that all?"
But! Neither do you want to toss away all your character's secrets and complications in the first chapters of your book. As Noah Lukeman writes in The Plot Thickens, "storytelling is not about giving away information but about withholding it."
Ilsa Bick's Drowning Instinct is a recent example of just the right level of restraint--she manages to keep us hanging on to find out the specific details of the tragedy that opens the book. That restraint ups the tension and anticipation in the book.
Of course, it helps that Bick weaves together many threads in the plot. In fact, that's a second point about this whole withholding idea: it works best when you're working between several plot lines or at least dimensions of a story. In Bick's, for example, in addition to the big secret, we have unanswered questions for at least fifty pages at a time for a number of plot threads. These additional layers of mystery, which are peeled back befor the "big reveal" keep our eyes trained on the novel's striptease. The result is suspense, lots of it.
I'd like to have some of that. So I'm working on my layers...
Holy Carolrhoda Lab generosity! Third Authors for Henryville auction
Carolrhoda Lab and my fab editor Andrew Karre have been hugely generous in offering heaps of titles for the Authors for Henryville auction. Check out these amazing offerings! Bid in the comments for each listing between now and 9 p.m. Eastern time on Saturday (3/17).
Autographed Carolrhoda titles: The Freak Observer by Blythe Woolston, The Absolute Value of -1 by Steve Brezenoff, and Draw the Dark by Ilsa J. Bick--all of which are autographed by their fabulous (and award-winning!) authors.
BFYA Books: YALSA's Best Fiction for YA list is a go-to resource for teachers, librarians, and readers all over the country. Both Brooklyn, Burning (Steve Brezenoff) and What Can't Wait (Ashley Hope Pérez) made the list. Bid, read, and find out why. Psst! This copy of Brooklyn, Burning is autographed!
"You'll Never See It Coming" pack: Like a twist? Get ready!! The Knife and the Butterfly, Drowning Instinct, and Ultraviolet (all from Carolrhoda Lab) will keep you guessing until the last page.
Novels of Transformation pack: Transformations can take many forms, as you will see from this trio of novels: Everything I Was by Corinne Demas, In Trouble by Ellen Levine, and What Can't Wait by Ashley Hope Pérez!
Unlikely Journeys pack: Road trips and more! Explore three unlikely journeys with these wonderful (and diverse) novels from Carolrhoda Lab: Catch & Releaseby Blythe Woolston, No Crystal Stair by Vaunda Micheaux Nelson, and Lost in the River of Grass by Ginny Rorby.
Elizabeth Atkinson - Emma Freke Audiobook: Elizabeth Atkinson's middle-grade novel, I Emma Freke on audiobook--this is begging for listening on a family road trip or just for fun!
Barbara Shoup: Get your hands on two novels by award-winning Indiana author Barbara Shoup, courtesy of the fabulous Andrew Karre, former editor at Flux. Here's Everything You Want and Wish You Were Here.
Final sprint and reflections on the race, er, blog tour
I'm a little out of breath, but I'm happy. I finished the race, er, I mean the blog tour for The Knife and the Butterfly. And I had fun. Really. And I did not spend all my writing time for top-secret novel #3 setting up guest posts. I did my writing a little bit at a time--mostly in advance--and, lo and behold, that elephant got eaten!
I'll admit that for about 5 minutes I thought about the whole blog tour thing as a kind of author obligation (seeing as how--living in Paris and all--I'm not able to do as much live promo stuff). But I grew out of that fast when I realized what a great chance a blog tour is to learn about my own writing, meet great bloggers and fellow authors, and connect with readers. I even discovered a few writing soulmates along the way.
Speaking of... Tanita S. Davis over at Finding Wonderland did this amazing post all about the blog tour that captures very well what's important about a blog tour:
The best thing about a blog tour is that it allows an author to think deeply and really talk about their work, and allows readers to ask the niggling, secret, or silly questions they've got lurking within them about a work, about an author, or about their process.
You definitely should read Tanita's whole Big Ideas, Small Venues post.
Okay, so I have lots more to say about blog tours--why to do them, how to do them and handle organization (thank you, Scrivener), and more. But here's one last blog tour digest to send you spinning out in many directions across the Internet. This time, I'm starting with my favorites...
2/17/12 -·The Edge in Fiction, or: Why Safe Books Are Dead Books·-·Finding Wonderland
I think this is the most important post of the tour. Not a defense of cussing or "mature themes," but an exploration of why books need to take us to some kind of edge.
2/23/12 -·Excerpt from·TK&TB·plus 6 peeks behind the scenes·-·Books from Bleh to Basically Amazing
My favorite excerpt from The Knife and the Butterfly.
2/27/12 -·Letter to My Teen Self (including... how I dropped out of high school and found a voice) -·Dear Teen Me
Definitely the highest concentration of embarrassing stories about me on the Internet. Also... nerdy photos.
Even more fab posts here:
2/17/12 - Review of The Knife and the Butterfly·- Stacked
2/20/12 - Interview (including... my misplaced loyalties, plot twists, and takeaways) - Ex-libris Kate
2/21/12 -·One Houston, Two Worlds (& excerpt) -·Fictitious Musings
2/22/12 - Two Truths and a Lie Contest -·Maggie's Bookshelf·**Giveaway**
2/24/12 - Being a Writer in Paris (with photos!) -·Confessions of a Readaholic
Click here for links to all 30+ (!) blog tour stops. And thanks to everyone who helped make the blog tour a success--much gratitude!